In class we have been learning about what makes a good comment, I am going to rank some comments based on how good theyย are. and i am going to be rating them with stars 0-5
I think the first one should get a 0
I think 2 should get a 4.5
I think 3 should get a 4
I think that 4 should get a 1.5
I think 5 should get aย 4.9
i think 6 should get a 0.5
I think that 7 should get a 2
I think that 8 should get a 4.9
The air turned black all around me and suddenly i felt a cold dripping on my back as iย turned around and i saw lighting faintly through the black distance and i started to see it more clearly but that was when i realised it was because it was coming closer to me a lot quicker than i thought, but the only thing in front of me was a steep bridge that i could not see the end to through the dark air surrounding me so i ran on to the bridge the further i got the more i started to see the other side of the bridge as i noticed that me running is not the only thing making me see the other side of the bridge, the air was getting clearer and so i looked behind me and all i saw was black so the black air must have only affected where i was now thatย it was a lot clearer i could see some sortย of island it was reallyย small and that was justย as i realised that the bridge was about to fall down from the lightning and as soon asย i realised the bridge collapsed and i never had a chance to get to the other side yet there was only like 20 meters to go andย finallyย i fell…ย
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The content China is in is Asia
the capital city of China is Beijing
China is in the northern hemisphere
The population in China is 1 billion 409 million 323 thousand 776
Chinas national language is mandarin
The Chinese currency in an Australian dollar is 0.20
The connection China has with Australia is Australia is China’s sixth largest trading partner; it is China’s fifth biggest supplier of imports and its tenth biggest customer for exports
An interest fact about China is China is the world’s third biggest country by territory, and has the largest population
China is bordered by 14 countries: Afghanistan, Bhutan, India, Kazakhstan, North Korea, Kyrgyzstan,Laos, Mongolia, Myanmar (Burma), Nepal, Pakistan, Russia, Tajikistan, and Vietnam. Furthermore it shares maritime borders with Brunei, Indonesia, Japan, South Korea, Malaysia, the Philippines, and Taiwan.
Hi its Me again
and i just got my avatar and so now you can kind of tell what i look like.
Dear Readers,
I am very exited to hear form you form the other side of the world!ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย Also a Fun fact about me is I love playing soccer and playing with dogs and i love skiing
